As the moon reflects the sun,
the moonlight’s reflections ripple on the ocean’s surface,
and on the eyes of the person standing next to you—
those eyes also hold the reflection of you.
Seeing the I in the eyes of
your relative or friend or lover or new acquaintance,
the I that everything orbits around:
the ship’s railing gripped by your fingers,
the whole ship,
the ocean (including the depths, yes even the dark depths),
the moon,
the sun (hidden to you now, though).
All waiting to hear and see what you’ll say and do next.
Hopeful and beautiful
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I appreciate that, Beth. Thank you 🌞
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a wonderful moment, beautifully evoked
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I appreciate that, John. Thank you 🌞
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Beautiful poems as always. I loved the phrasing, rhymes and meaning behind the poem. As someone that has often reflected on his life decisions, I related to the poem’s reflective nature. It brought to mind many meaningful films I’ve seen in the past that are set on an ocean. For instance, the poem made me think of Ang Lee’s “Life of Pi”. A beautiful adaptation of the beloved book, it tells the story of a teenager put into a painful situation when he survives a shipwreck on the vast ocean. It’s a meaningful movie with a reflective message about life that you captured in your poem. Based on the reflective nature of your poem, I have a feeling you would enjoy this film. Here’s why I recommend it strongly:
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“Life of Pi” is a wondrous book and movie. I very much enjoyed both of them.
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Thank you, Dave — so very lovely about the power of place, the unknowns and awareness. Love it! 💕
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I appreciate that, Vicki. Thank you! 🌞
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Great poem, Dave, that invokes deep inner thoughts.
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That’s a fantastic compliment, thank you 🌞
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This piece is magical, Dave. A delight to read.
~David
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Very glad you enjoyed it! Thank you 🌞
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This is powerful, Dave!🌺
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The I in the eyes. Wow! Such beautiful connection in this poem.
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Thank you! I appreciate that 🌞
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Fantastic!
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Thanks Bob 🌞
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I love this, Dave. We are all part of other people we interact with through reflections in our eyes. So cool!
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I like how you phrased that about interactions. Thank you!
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My pleasure, DAve.
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Dave, that’s so evocative and atmospheric. Well done. Hugs.
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Glad you liked the poem, Teagan. Thanks! 🌞
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Well done, Dave.
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Thanks Mark. I appreciate that 🌞
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Very thought provoking piece..it such a good poem for so many reasons. That moment of anticipation, of recognition, of reflection, of hope, of appreciation… The moment that lingers permanently…I think that’s what I feel in this piece. It’s intimate. 🙏
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Thank you, Nigel. I appreciate your kind words 🌞
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You’re welcome, Dave. 🙏
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